Dangling Participle
I forgot to put the subject In front of the action. I lost my step Steep footing sharp, gentle sloped terrain Trouble ahead Double rewind Whimsical, thorny branches Litter the neat cobblestone path to a Forbearing, forbidding garden Paw licking felines line the walls Hiss to the beat of her steps Tender pulsating bliss As she moves Gingerly in silence Through their land Holding her own hand Mind cursed, Well versed Human Beast Sacred mammal She knows she’s hunting and hunted Softly piercing eyes Fixated on her foliage Wondering what’s poison, What’s nourishing So she steps in front of the bow As the arrow loses Splinters Near miss and Direct hit Creating An extraordinarily dull ordinary contradiction See: He wants her vulnerable What happens when she’s not?